Audio+Recording+Sad+News

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http://thestar.com.my/news/story.asp?sec=nation&file=/2010/10/11/nation/7201269

SEREMBAN: Twelve people were killed when a north-bound express bus crashed through the guardrail and ploughed into five vehicles heading in the opposition direction at KM223.2 of the North South Expressway near Simpang Ampat here. Forty-five others were also injured in the 7.45pm accident, which occured near the Negri Sembilan-Malacca border here yesterday. Witnesses said the express bus crashed into the rear of a car before the driver lost control of his vehicle and rammed through the guardrail and onto the path of an oncoming bus, two cars and a motorcycle.The impact caused the express bus to flip onto its side. The bus driver and motorcyclist were among the casualties. The oncoming bus belonged to the Welfare Department.Apparently, out of the 45 injured, four have been rushed to the Kuala Lumpur Hospital for treatment, 22 were sent to a hospital in Seremban and 12 to another hospital in Malacca.The express bus had left Malacca about 45 minutes before the accident and was on its way to Kuala Lumpur.Of the 12 who died, eight were believed to be passengers from the express bus.Two others were from a MyVi, which was crushed by the bus, and another from a Honda Accord.


 * This is my second audio recording. It is about a terrible road accident which occurs between two buses and a car in Negeri Sembilan-Melaka border. Please leave a comment guys..=) **

Arif ' s comment:

The intensity of the voice is good.
 * 1. Volume: **

Low pitch. Sound like a DJ radio.
 * 2. Pitch: **

The rate is not bad but i think you can increase the speed of it a little bit.
 * 3.Rate: **

I cannot feel the sadness of your new. I think you can improve it.
 * 4.Emotion: **

Maybe you can improve your pronunciation.
 * 5. Pronunciation: **

Rabeah Adawiyah's comments:

**<span style="background: white; color: fuchsia; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 115%;">1. volume. The volume of your voice is good. **

**<span style="background: white; color: fuchsia; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 115%;">2. pitch. Low pitch at most time, but sometimes you must increase the pitch at certain words. **

**<span style="background: white; color: fuchsia; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 115%;">3. rate. In an average rate. Not too fast. ** **<span style="background: white; color: fuchsia; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 115%;">4. emotion. I can feel the sad emotions but at the same time I laughed because it sounds like reciting a poem passionately. But then I know it is hard to inject sad emotions in the recording. **

**<span style="background: white; color: fuchsia; font-family: 'Arial','sans-serif'; font-size: 13.5pt; line-height: 115%;">5. pronunciation. Have to improve the pronunciation and learn to pronounce the numbers. I enjoyed the news and I know you can do better! **