How+Do+I+Love+Thee

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 * This is my first poet recital..please leave your comments..=) **


 * Rabeah's comment: **


 *  1. volume. **


 * Your volume is low. It should be louder so that I can hear the pronunciation. **


 * 2. pitch. **


 * You have moderate pitch. Maybe you can try to mix up high pitch and low pitch at certain phrases. **


 * 3. rate. **


 * Moderate and good, can be improved. **


 * 4. emotion. **


 * I heard the emotion. But you can put more passion and love aspiration into the poem recitation. **


 * 5. pronunciation. **


 * The pronunciation can be improve. Well done!! **

ARIF'S COMMENT :


 * 1. Volume: ** **The intensity of the voice is good. **


 * 2. Pitch: ** **Your pitch is too low. **


 * 3.Rate: ** **<span style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-weight: normal;">The rate of your words is quiet slow maybe you can faster it a bit but overall is good. **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif;">4.Emotion: ** **<span style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-weight: normal;">I can feel the emotion in your voice but i'm sure you can give more. **


 * <span style="font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif;">5. Pronunciation: **Your pronunciation is good but there are some grammatical and pronunciation errors. However, I got no problem in understanding your poem recitation. So, I hope you can improve on it.